DarlingMaxim's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Fluffy Mob]

Yeah, you really need to make your descriptions more.... descriptive, if you want people to really appreciate this. Animation was cool, but I had no idea what was going on, or why.

LittleCuteCorpse responds:

thx, I fixed

[Animation movie "Paper cl]

Wow! 4.5 stars for emotion and execution.

I like the stop motion. While not perfectly fluid, it's not bad, and its choppiness actually adds to the feeling of mystery. The music is also a good fit. The only thing I would think of to perhaps change is the ending. I'm not totally sure what the purpose was, or the storyline behind this video, just based on the video. Your description sheds some light on this. What was our paper clip friend's objective?

Just some things to keep in mind. Keep up the great work!

larit responds:

Thanks, perhaps then I will continue this subject, but so far there are no reasons and why paper clips, I very much like to make of them different things, actually the person from the movie is made of paper clips.

[The Question]

Haha, this isn't bad. Clever use of background images, and decent animation.

I will say, however, that while stick figures can be great story tellers, I think you could have done more with it. Have them move a little more while talking, or give them faces. (I couldn't tell who was talking sometimes). The voice over work was pretty good as well. It does sounds a bit "fake," though, if that makes sense - like I could tell it wasn't the stick figures talking. Try standing closer or farther away from your mic and try a pop filter. Trial and error I always say.

But it's a good start, so kudos to you! I liked it :)

plasticapple responds:

Thank you so much for your advice, Garaladin! I'm actually working on a new stick figure animation and your comment has helped me change things I haven't noticed before. Thank you again! :)