DarlingMaxim's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Tera PvP]

Bahaha! That's actually pretty funny. I think the animation is a good start, and the voice acting is really good.

I would perhaps add a few more sound effects, like for walking, and the fire, and the motion could be a little smoother. But the humor was definitely on point. I was hoping it'd be longer!

[You're so stupid!]

I liked it! The animation was very clean and pretty and sound was good. The mouth didn't match up with the words all that well, but otherwise I'd say job well done! I, too, look forward to future works!

[Three for a Death: No Evil 012]

This animation is terrific. And I'm really intrigued about the story.

I would, however, say the voice acting could use some work. They sometimes don't feel like they're fully "in" the story if that makes sense. Maybe raspying up some of the voices or recording a little lower would be better. Otherwise, I look forward to the next one!

[Animation movie "Paper cl]

Wow! 4.5 stars for emotion and execution.

I like the stop motion. While not perfectly fluid, it's not bad, and its choppiness actually adds to the feeling of mystery. The music is also a good fit. The only thing I would think of to perhaps change is the ending. I'm not totally sure what the purpose was, or the storyline behind this video, just based on the video. Your description sheds some light on this. What was our paper clip friend's objective?

Just some things to keep in mind. Keep up the great work!

larit responds:

Thanks, perhaps then I will continue this subject, but so far there are no reasons and why paper clips, I very much like to make of them different things, actually the person from the movie is made of paper clips.

[The Question]

Haha, this isn't bad. Clever use of background images, and decent animation.

I will say, however, that while stick figures can be great story tellers, I think you could have done more with it. Have them move a little more while talking, or give them faces. (I couldn't tell who was talking sometimes). The voice over work was pretty good as well. It does sounds a bit "fake," though, if that makes sense - like I could tell it wasn't the stick figures talking. Try standing closer or farther away from your mic and try a pop filter. Trial and error I always say.

But it's a good start, so kudos to you! I liked it :)

plasticapple responds:

Thank you so much for your advice, Garaladin! I'm actually working on a new stick figure animation and your comment has helped me change things I haven't noticed before. Thank you again! :)

[American Alligator]

This definitely looks like it should be on the air. Well done!

[Back To Tamriel]

Great animation, great humor. And great music! Well done.

[Not another Pokémon batt]

Haha, these are so good.